Dazzle and Peal's design look very cartoonish, the design and scene look like they are in Tom and Jerry sketch. Peal's expression is just priceless. She knows she can't stop Dazzle's eating habit but she tries anyway. I've noticed a bit of a trend whenever you draw Dazzle an Peal it varys in design and style. I love how dazzle thinks he can get away with his unhealthy eating habits when Peal is around like he does with Diamond Tiara. It really shows more depth in the relationship between both Dazzle and Diamond Tiara, and Peal and Dazzle. Peal looks rather fox or squirrel like when she stands upright. Overall; I thought the picture was pretty good! I might be a bit bias but still.
Thanks so much for the criticism. I do tend to lean on the cartoony side of things, and I do love experimenting with my designs. I'm still working on the relationship between Dazzle and Peal, so I'm glad that something is starting to come through. And I see what you mean about Peal. She's got that squirrel/fox look about her.